A man has been driving on the motorway for many hours.
He is tired, exhausted.
Then he sees a sign for a service station. Somewhere to get a cup of coffee and have a rest.
So he pulls in.
But what he sees is beyond his darkest nightmares…
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What kind of services does your country have on motorways?
If you are driving on the motorway and need to stop for a rest and maybe drink a cup of coffee, where can you go?
What are these places like?
Do they provide a good service?
Last Stop
The motorway stretched in front of him like a never-ending black ribbon.
John had been driving for hours and he could no longer remember if he felt tired or not.
It was like he had lost all sense of feeling in his mind and body.
His was the only car on the road ahead. No other vehicles on either side of the two wide lanes of the motorway.
He blinked and cracked the window open a little to let in the cool night air. He breathed it in, took deep lungfuls of oxygen to clear the fog from his mind.
The gas tank read close to empty. And John needed a break.
What he really needed was sleep.
Driving on, in what felt like a haze, John saw a flickering sign up ahead.
As he got closer, he read the sign clearly: Last Stop Service Station.
John had been up and down this motorway a hundred times but had never seen this service station before. But the thought soon passed at the welcome idea of a cup of coffee and an hour or two of sleep in his car.
He pulled into the station, driving up the ramp road that came off the motorway. And as he came into the main forecourt, he saw that it was completely deserted.
It seemed strange to see no other cars there. No other sign of life.
But the call of nature, the lure of caffeine and a rest was practically intoxicating.
He parked in the deserted car park and made his way to the main building. One flickering sign above the main entrance.
No modern-day sliding doors in this place. Instead, an old rusted-out door that John had to shove open with his shoulder.
A small bell above the door pinged to signify his entrance.
Inside the building was a scene from a bygone era. Like something from decades ago.
A fluorescent light buzzed above him on the ceiling.
The shelves were stacked with snacks and confectionery but also covered in dust.
As John got closer, he saw that the labels on the items were from years ago.
What was this place?
It was like he had gone back in time.
Trying to find someone, a cashier or a worker, John made his way to the counter.
An ancient cash register placed heavily in front of him.
But no signs of life. No one around.
It was like the place had been abandoned decades ago, and no one thought to close it up.
A sense of unease crawled into John’s exhausted nerves but he was too tired to concern himself with it.
He grabbed a can of soft drink and a small bag of snacks and went to the public bathrooms.
A sign read: Gents. Like something from his grandfather’s days.
As he pushed the door open, he was overwhelmed by a powerful and nauseating odour that washed over him.
A putrid mix of something decaying and rotten, combined with something else, something indescribable.
The interior of the room was dingy. A dimly lit space.
But John hastily made his way into one of the stalls.
The walls of the toilet were covered in the usual graffiti. But there was something else there too.
Some dark stains that looked like blood.
John’s senses fired up and he found a new kind of energy. This was like walking into a living nightmare.
But exhaustion clawed at his brain, his tired-out muscles.
Coming out of the cramped stall, John tried to wash his hands in the sink, but the taps didn’t work.
The sink was filled with filth.
And again, what looked like dried-up blood.
He made his way back to the main building of the station. The old, decrepit supermarket and cash desk.
And as he emerged into the larger room, he heard the voices.
Faint, muffled whispering that seemed to come from the corner of the room.
It sounded like several people at one time, all trying to call out. Calling John for help.
John couldn’t make out what the voices were saying, it was like they were gagged. But the sound sent shivers down his spine.
He neared the counter and he realised that the voices were coming from behind the long desk at the front.
There was a large flap to let the cashier in and out and John lifted it slowly. It creaked open, the two hinges rusted from lack of use.
And as he stepped behind the desk, what he saw was beyond his darkest nightmares.
Lying huddled on the floor, under the desk, a group of emaciated figures stared back at him.
Their eyes hollowed out, their skin pallid and peeling away.
Their mouths opening and closing, but no teeth visible. Just rows of blackened gums and tongues freckled with filth and dust.
On their bodies, the tattered remains of their clothing.
Bloodstained and covered in grime.
All of them entwined together, trapped in some kind of twisted, eternal torment.
John staggered back, terror rising up and coursing through his veins.
He knew he had to escape. Get out of this hellish place, get in his car and just drive.
But as he spun around towards the door, he found the exit blocked with more of the grotesque figures.
One of them wore the tattered remains of the service station uniform. Another, a jacket from an electrical supply company. A third, the last remnants of what was at one time a business suit.
They all tried to call out, but just a choked sound came from their blood-stained mouths.
John veered down an aisle and saw another of the creatures blocking his way.
Panic-stricken he lashed out with his hand, trying to keep some distance between himself and these things, these beings, whatever they were.
Then, from behind, John felt an arm slip around his neck and hold him tight.
The other figures loped forward towards him, hissing and groaning.
The last thing John saw was the sign outside in the car park.
Last Stop Service Station.
Reading Comprehension Questions
Who is the main character in the story?
What is he doing?
Where is he?
How does the motorway appear to John as he drives?
What is John’s mental and physical state while driving?
Describe the surroundings that John sees when he arrives at the Last Stop Service Station.
What catches John’s attention as he approaches the service station?
How does John react to the deserted appearance of the service station?
What does John notice about the items on the shelves in the service station?
In the public bathroom, what unpleasant odour overwhelms him?
What does John find on the walls of the toilet stall in the bathroom?
Why does John feel a sense of unease in the service station?
What happens when John tries to wash his hands in the sink?
Describe the sound that John hears when he re-enters the main building.
Where do the faint, muffled voices seem to be coming from?
What does John discover behind the cashier’s desk in the service station?
How do the figures under the desk appear physically?
What are the figures wearing? What items of clothing?
What is the state of the clothing worn by the emaciated figures?
What is the atmosphere like in the service station as John encounters the figures?
Why does John feel terror rising up as he sees the figures?
What obstructs John’s path when he tries to escape from the service station?
What is the significance of the sign outside the service station in the end?
Essential Vocabulary
deserted | terror | filth |
caffeine | grotesque | decrepit |
intoxicating | blood-stained | huddled |
flickering | panic-stricken | emaciated |
confectionery | lashed out | pallid |
unease | hissing | peeling |
nauseating | groaning | entwined |
decaying | car park | twisted |
indescribable | service station | torment |
Exercise
Write down all the words and phrases in your vocabulary notebook. Look in your dictionary and find the meaning of each word. Write the definition next to each word.
Then make up your own sentences using each word or phrase.
For example:
Deserted — Abandoned or uninhabited, lacking people or activity.
Terror — Intense fear or dread, often provoked by a looming threat.
Then write a sentence of your own that uses the new word or phrase correctly.
The old, deserted house on the hill stood as a haunting reminder of a once-thriving community.
The sudden loud noise sent a wave of terror through the crowd, causing chaos and panic.
Do this with all the vocabulary and, over time, this will help improve all your English skills — reading, writing, speaking and listening.
Discussion Questions
What are your initial thoughts and feelings as you read about John’s experience on the deserted motorway?
If you were in John’s situation, driving for hours with no other cars in sight, how would you cope with the feeling of isolation and fatigue?
What do you think might have caused John to feel a sense of unease when he entered the Last Stop Service Station?
Describe the atmosphere and setting of the Last Stop Service Station. How does the author create a sense of unease and mystery?
Do you believe the deserted and outdated appearance of the service station contributed to the eerie atmosphere? Why or why not?
How does the author use sensory details, like the description of the gas tank, the night air, and the flickering sign, to enhance the reader’s experience?
Discuss the significance of the old-fashioned elements in the service station, such as the rusted door, ancient cash register, and dim lighting
What emotions and sensations do you think John experienced as he explored the service station? How did the author convey these feelings?
If you were driving late at night and saw a service station you had never noticed before, would you stop or keep driving? Why or why not?
Discuss the significance of the old-fashioned aspects of the service station, like the rusted door and the ancient cash register. How do these details contribute to the eerie atmosphere?
How does the author build suspense throughout the story, especially as John explores the service station and encounters the bizarre scenes?
Were there any clues or foreshadowing in the story that hinted at the horrifying truth behind the Last Stop Service Station?
How did John’s exhaustion and desire for rest contribute to the unfolding events in the story?
Share your thoughts on the use of the abandoned and decaying restroom as a setting. How does it contribute to the overall feeling of horror?
What emotions and reactions do you think John might have experienced as he discovered the emaciated figures in the service station? How would you have felt in his place?
If you were in John’s situation, what would your immediate reactions and decisions be upon discovering the horrifying scene behind the counter?
Imagine you are one of the trapped figures in the service station. What might your back story be, and how did you end up in that situation?
What do you think the author intended to convey through the appearance and behaviour of the emaciated figures in the service station?
Discuss the symbolism of the bloodstains and dark stains in the restroom and behind the counter. What do you think they represent in the context of the story?
If you were a filmmaker adapting this story, how would you visually depict the eerie scenes in the service station to maximize their impact?
Explore the theme of isolation in the story. How does John’s isolation on the motorway contrast with the seemingly abandoned service station?
How does the author use the element of surprise, especially in the revelation of the trapped figures, to evoke fear and suspense in the reader?
Discuss the role of exhaustion in John’s decision-making and perception of the events. How does fatigue contribute to the horror element in the story?
If you were writing a continuation of the story, what would you imagine happening next to John? How would he try to escape the Last Stop Service Station?
If you were to rewrite the ending, how might you have John escape from the Last Stop Service Station, or would you keep it as is?
How might the story change if the author provided more background information on the origin of the creatures or the history of the service station?
How does the author create a sense of claustrophobia and entrapment in the service station, both physically and psychologically?
Share your theories on the origin and nature of the emaciated figures. What might have led to their current state, and why are they trapped in the service station?
Discuss the impact of the story’s ending. How does the revelation of the service station’s name add to the overall sense of dread?
Explore the symbolism behind the phrase “Last Stop” in the context of the story. What could it represent metaphorically?
If you were to rewrite the ending, what alternative outcome could you envision for John? How might he escape the perilous situation at the Last Stop Service Station?
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